dihydrogen monoxide ( H 2O) 09:49, (UTC) Done, and also went ahead to do some general copyediting.
"Despite this, the review from IGN also commented," - "He also commented" would work just as well.(if not better!). Leave me a note when done and I'll take another look (please don't strike).cheers, dihydrogen monoxide ( H 2O) 10:22, (UTC) I think I've addressed all concerns. Reception section could do with significant expansion, esp. "that mentioned Episode Two would be released" - sounds odd.perhaps "stating that.". "Because the technology used was the same for both games" - try to avoid starting a sentence with because.best to reword the whole sentence. "An interview with PC Gamer magazine." - no refs for this interview?. It feels like there are too many images.are they all needed?. "being sort of a non-human character." - somewhat is probably a better word than sort of. Who are Robin Walker and Erik Johnson? - their roles aren't explained the first time they're named. There's something similar in Setting (best to check the article throughout for this sort of thing :). Woah.personally I'm not a big fan of stacks of quoting like at the start (especially at the start) of the gameplay rge that into text and add your own words around it. Mezigue ( talk) 17:33, 24 September 2008 (UTC) GAN on hold I see nothing ambiguous in the article - what's that about "falling harmlessly"? It doesn't say this anywhere. I thought that gorden freeman is armed with combine weaponary he looted from their corpses ? -Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.67.185.226 ( talk) 12:01, 24 September 2008 (UTC) Not sure what you are on about. Why does a magnussen device explodes as soon as gorden freeman hits it, and why doesn't it go of when combine troops shoot at it(it falls of harmlessly) Magnussen paradox ?:Don't mind the spelling errors (im dutch).Reading through the paragraphs i found something i didnt understand. Thoughts? Mezigue ( talk) 09:38, 20 April 2008 (UTC) Since I have had no feedback on this whatsoever I have now rewritten the section. This paragraph could be summed up in a few lines and the interviews simply linked to. It seems to me these long quotes from interviews made sense before the game was released but are now redundant.
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